Three Events

Jan 14, 2016 18:56
There were three events yesterday and today, so I will write them together in this diary.

First, I got an official job offer (the occupation is correspond to an assistant professor) yesterday.

I'm so happy.

Second, I took a TOEIC Speaking Writing exam today.

The speaking section was very tough for me because my practice was not enough.

Finally, I finished learning 12,000 words.

It took around 200 hours.

Although it brought a sense of accomplishment, I no doubt forget many words, I'm planning to start the similar learning from the beginning.

By the way, the 12,000 th word was "twitter."

It was very easy thank to a SNS, haha.
3つの出来事

昨日と今日で3つの出来事があったので、まとめて日記に書きます。

まず昨日、大学教員の内定を頂くことができました。

とても嬉しいです。

そして今日はTOEIC SWの試験を受けました。

話す練習をほとんどしてこなかったので、スピーキングが苦しかったです。

最後に、今日ついに12,000単語の学習が完了しました。

おおよそ200時間かかりました。

とても達成感がありますが、忘れている単語も多いので、また初めからやり直す予定です。

ちなみに、12m000番目の単語は「twitter」でした。

あるSNSのおかげでとても簡単な単語でした(笑)
No. 1 mikie's correction
  • There were three events yesterday and today, so I will write them together in this diary.
  • There were three events yesterday, so today I will write about them in this diary.
  • First, I got an official job offer (the occupation is correspond to an assistant professor) yesterday.
  • First, Yesterday I got an official job offer (the occupation correspond to an assistant professor).
  • Second, I took a TOEIC Speaking Writing exam today.
  • The second one, was that today I had taken a TOEIC Speaking Writing exam.
  • Although it brought a sense of accomplishment, I no doubt forget many words, I'm planning to start the similar learning from the beginning.
  • Although it brought a sense of accomplishment, I no doubt forget many words, I'm planning to do a similar learning exercise again.
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
No. 2 Timmy's correction
  • There were three events yesterday and today, so I will write them together in this diary.
  • There were three events that occurred over the past two days that I want to write about in detail in this diary.
  • It took around 200 hours.
  • It took me around 200 hours.
Nice! Congratulations on getting a new job. You definitely deserve it.
kanotown
Thank you so much always for correcting my post!
And thank you for the nice comment! I'm going to try my best :)
Timmy
You're welcome!^_^
No. 3 polyglotlearner3's correction
  • I'm so happy.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • The speaking section was very tough for me because my practice was not enough.
  • The speaking section was very tough for me, because my practice was not enough.
     In my opinion, speaking in another language is the hardest followed by listening as a close second.
  • Finally, I finished learning 12,000 words.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Although it brought a sense of accomplishment, I no doubt forget many words, I'm planning to start the similar learning from the beginning.
  • Although it brought a sense of accomplishment, I no doubt forgot many words. I'm planning to start the similar learning from the beginning.
     The other person's correction was good! Personally, I think a period is needed before transitioning to the following sentence though. (It felt like a run-on sentence.)
  • By the way, the 12,000 th word was "twitter."
  • By the way, the 12,000th word was "Twitter."
  • It was very easy thank to a SNS, haha.
  • It was very easy thanks to a SNS, haha.
Congratulations on the new job!! Keep up the hard work with studying, it always pays off in the end. ^^
kanotown
Thank you so much for the corrections and your comment!
I'll do my best toward my next dream :)
polyglotlearner3
You're welcome! Always happy to help!!
And glad to hear that. (^o^ )
No. 4 Sharu's correction
  • Although it brought a sense of accomplishment, I no doubt forget many words, I'm planning to start the similar learning from the beginning.
  • Although it brought a sense of accomplishment, I forgot many words, no doubt. So, I'm planning to start revising from the beginning.
おめでとうございます!この調子で:)
kanotown
Thank you very much for the correction and your comment!
この調子で頑張ります (^-^)
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